1234ymw 发表于 2008-6-16 02:06   全显示 1楼
嗯，不错。~~让我记起了阿里中约翰对霓虹姐妹的调教那一段。这二者不分伯仲啊~
在虐戏中，心理的细微变化是第一位啊，大大对其言语及心理变化的过程的描写把这一过程很细腻的写了出来。让我很是喜欢。个人觉得对白上，应该可以更露骨点哦，这样更能体现心理的变化。。
希望再接再厉~~:-)！
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